Fallen World - Page 7 - ...and Full of Terrors

I love the colors, they work well for the scene and theme. Also the way whispering is shown on the screen is really cool and creative. I know I'm complimenting too much but I LOVE how much emotions the characters convey, that's pretty neat. I'm not very good at critiquing I'm sorry. I can't really put my finger on anything to improve on because I think this is really good and there isn't a lot like this. I really like the texture of the rope but the bright yellow isn't great. Lighting and shading need a little work but nobody is perfect at it and I know you'll improve. Other than that there isn't much to improve on. I'm excited for the next comic page!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>