Fallen World - Page 10 - The Fur Will Fly

Okay, so I read the whole story again to get a good idea of where you're story is at. For this part of the comic I think I like the bottom half the best, I think the positions you put the characters in are pretty realistic and the emotions are seen clearly. However, in the top right corner it's kind of hard to see what's going on. I had to look at it a few times before I realized what was happening. I know it's there because of the glow, but maybe mess with the shadowing a little bit and see if the image can be made more clear. Keep up the good work! I'm excited to see if any of the witnesses have slightly different images of what the killer looked like. I know they both look similar, but there might be something...